you finally updated!

i like the ending where he tells her she almost crushed his nuts.

great job, wonder what's going to happen from here...

hey man

awesome story so far.

i like the donut guy and how he scoffed full donuts. that was a crack up. u better continue with the story coz its good so far!

ithinkyourgay :D

Good first chapter. It's too early to be too connected to the characters, but I already like the girl a lot.

Hope you update soon :)

That was cute, I bet he's probably going to go find her now, he seemed pretty upset that she didn't say sorry. And what did he mean by "You"? Do they know each other? i guess i'll just have to find out!

Ha,ha Fudge melons, I love that!

Interesting start for your story..i like it ...update soon!

cute, I see something in here..anyway, may I invite you to join fpawunlimited.? please go there and see for yourself. )