Go Jack! Oliver is putting out a good vibe too ;) Jeez, though...this will definitely get interesting.

Hah I laughed a bit during this chapter, especially the intercom stunt. Funny stuff :)Oh, and I also see why Adam deserves to be called an asshole-such a douchehead. Off to read more!

You know, Jack comes off as more of an asshole than Adam most of the time xD

hellos! Yes, I still read. I am a ninja! Did you miss me?

And a nice date between Adam and Jack would be a lovely gift!

Yayes! Can't wait until Adam and Jack go on a date I'm so exited!

That was a good tension-easing chapter. I hope to find more drama soon though.

...And yes, I do have a sh**load of animals. I used to have 9 pets, but our family's sort of split up. My rabbit Nessa's pregnant though, so there should be more soon. *gulp* Anyway, I love animals, so I don't mind the work. :)

*S. Snowflake

aww Oliver knows Jack so well _

jaja givin Adam advice, hopefully he follows it

wonder how Jack's mom is gonna feel about the whole Jack/Adam thing lol

Dear (or Sir), I would call this anything but boring.

I love the way you write - it's first-person AND humorous. I've only read the first chap so far and I already love your characters.

IMO, the only flaw here is the way you (seem to be) economizing the spaces. It makes your story, over-all, look a little cluttered and compressed. But that's no big deal anyway. You can write a good story without too much spaces.

I'm not going to scream UPDATE yet, as I have... 23 chapters left to read.

My brother is the good twin. This chapter was interesting. Good job!

(: Love the story! I'd have to say out of all the pairings my favorit is Jack and Oliver. I just think Oliver is really cute, and I also I really dislike Adam. Well, I can't wait to see what happens!

Adam needs to show Jack his feelings already ! gosh lol

still love Oliver lol he's like a cute teddy bear _

Don't worry, I'm still reading. I'm just a little inconsistent about catching updates these days. XD Don't worry about me. I've got 4 rabbits, a dog, and a guinea pig to take care of, so I don't need any rewards. ;)

*S. Snowflake

good chapter i am very impressed on how quickly u produce chapters

oh,the drama! cant wait for the next update

What? Forever? NO! You HAVE to be joking. You're joking, right? Because if you're not, this is cruel and unusual.

I need something good to read and I have no money. This is my lifline. lol. Pathetic. But it's a REALLY good story.

Trust me. :)

-Ashes