|Reviews for Like Fruit|
| runswithvamp 2/26/10 . chapter 25
this guy is like so weird
| Brezzia 2/26/10 . chapter 9
Go Jack! Oliver is putting out a good vibe too ;) Jeez, though...this will definitely get interesting.
| Brezzia 2/26/10 . chapter 3
Hah I laughed a bit during this chapter, especially the intercom stunt. Funny stuff :)Oh, and I also see why Adam deserves to be called an asshole-such a douchehead. Off to read more!
| Brezzia 2/26/10 . chapter 2
You know, Jack comes off as more of an asshole than Adam most of the time xD
| Loveless Breath 2/26/10 . chapter 23
hellos! Yes, I still read. I am a ninja! Did you miss me?
And a nice date between Adam and Jack would be a lovely gift!
| Loveless Breath 2/23/10 . chapter 24
Yayes! Can't wait until Adam and Jack go on a date I'm so exited!
| Star's Snowflake 2/22/10 . chapter 24
That was a good tension-easing chapter. I hope to find more drama soon though.
...And yes, I do have a sh**load of animals. I used to have 9 pets, but our family's sort of split up. My rabbit Nessa's pregnant though, so there should be more soon. *gulp* Anyway, I love animals, so I don't mind the work. :)
| Jeangu 2/21/10 . chapter 24
aww Oliver knows Jack so well _
jaja givin Adam advice, hopefully he follows it
wonder how Jack's mom is gonna feel about the whole Jack/Adam thing lol
| S'ant Alliesie 2/20/10 . chapter 1
Dear (or Sir), I would call this anything but boring.
I love the way you write - it's first-person AND humorous. I've only read the first chap so far and I already love your characters.
IMO, the only flaw here is the way you (seem to be) economizing the spaces. It makes your story, over-all, look a little cluttered and compressed. But that's no big deal anyway. You can write a good story without too much spaces.
I'm not going to scream UPDATE yet, as I have... 23 chapters left to read.
| I'm the Evil Twin 2/19/10 . chapter 23
My brother is the good twin. This chapter was interesting. Good job!
| starwberrys-rule 2/18/10 . chapter 23
(: Love the story! I'd have to say out of all the pairings my favorit is Jack and Oliver. I just think Oliver is really cute, and I also I really dislike Adam. Well, I can't wait to see what happens!
| Jeangu 2/17/10 . chapter 23
Adam needs to show Jack his feelings already ! gosh lol
still love Oliver lol he's like a cute teddy bear _
| Star's Snowflake 2/16/10 . chapter 23
Don't worry, I'm still reading. I'm just a little inconsistent about catching updates these days. XD Don't worry about me. I've got 4 rabbits, a dog, and a guinea pig to take care of, so I don't need any rewards. ;)
| runswithvamp 2/16/10 . chapter 23
good chapter i am very impressed on how quickly u produce chapters
| runswithvamp 2/13/10 . chapter 22
oh,the drama! cant wait for the next update