cuuute. thanks for sharing!

That was adorable, entertaining and just plain amazing to read

By the end of it I was sad because I just really wanted to read more between the two of them

Seriously addicting story and it deserves way more attention!

Loved it!

hahahaa, Tristen must be very cute!

Love this story :D

Sorry, before I continue reading the story, I just want to let you know that the word for a concrete edge is "curb"- just in case you forgot or didn't know. I honestly am not trying to be mean about this. I've read one of your other stories and liked it a lot. Okay, bye. :D

I like the paint dripping off the umbrella line. That's what it looks like.

I can't imagine a legal system where Shaun would be considered to have started it. It was his house and he was "defending" his roommate from attack. Julio using a knife when Shaun was only using his fists would count for something, at least were I live.

I like the story and the characters. Things didn't go too smoothly for them, nor unbelievably rough. And it kept my interest despite the constant interruptions in my life.

I think the end was prefect, kind of like an epilogue.

gah I loved It!

I like the gray feeling that this one has-it's dark, but not unbelievably so, and yet there is some humor and some happiness which makes it dreary but still pretty and awesome.

And I didn't think that the end was all that abrupt (but then I'm also an abrupt-story-ender, so I shouldn't be talking).

Lovely story!

Qui