I really enjoyed this. Keep writing.

Interesting. Wish it was a little longer

Sigh. I love stories about the devil (oh god, that sounds really awkward. I'm not crazy). Haha I think this is really good, and I did get who the Black Man was...I don't think it was necessary to clarify, especially because it's more mysterious if you don't. But anyway I really like your descriptions, and the premise of the story. I think you should keep going with it.