|Reviews for Pieces of Forever|
| Mirabella 12/25/09 . chapter 1
Lovely moments/lines displayed here! :)
"My troubles flutter to the floor
Like snowflakes on the devil’s wings" - like that!
"The tatters flutter to the ground,
Fragments without any sound." - another great few lines. :)
| letyoursoultakeflight 12/23/09 . chapter 1
Like snowflakes on the devil’s wings
- really like that imagery :)
Then the rhyming starts to shake
As deep inside me something breaks
- and love that bit!
Are you seriouly only 13? Very talented :)
| Stranger in the Night 12/5/09 . chapter 1
i enjoyed this poem a lot. it has a great flow and i like the repetition of 'i try to piece together a forever'. very good (:
| Princess-anna57 12/5/09 . chapter 1
Great job, this is a great writing style. Keep it up.