| Reviews for until the sun shines, |
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Isca 12/7/09 . chapter 1"caution: my mind is under construction." catchy opening line. "my body is just tried of trying to recover." i really like the tone of this line - it's very raw and emotional. |
Mister Bo Jangles 12/6/09 . chapter 1"these cloudy days make me miss you more than usual i've missed the sun for the last few days, i've missed the shine i miss you laying next to me, knowing you'll always be mine." I love this. Well done! |