|Reviews for until the sun shines,|
| Isca 12/7/09 . chapter 1
"caution: my mind is under construction." catchy opening line.
"my body is just tried of trying to recover." i really like the tone of this line - it's very raw and emotional.
| Mister Bo Jangles 12/6/09 . chapter 1
"these cloudy days make me miss you more than usual
i've missed the sun for the last few days, i've missed the shine
i miss you laying next to me, knowing you'll always be mine."
I love this. Well done!