Wow. I just...wow.

This is an amazingly evocative piece. Every word packs a punch, and every word is exactly where it needs to be. I can almost smell the trees, feel the warm breeze on my face.

This is just beautiful.

there are sweetly haunting lines to this that make it solid and tangible, something to dig your fingers into. "spring isn't eternal, and neither are our lives." and, "i had to hear the memories of the trees". i like them. very strong, lyrical words.

Beautiful!