|Reviews for faster than a car crash|
| drink me pretty 1/1/10 . chapter 1
Very intense. I love the way the two characters complement each other-pushing each other farther from reality. At least, that's how it seems to me. The line "I’ve got a full bottle of pills and you’ve got the ambition I’ve been lacking" kind of says it all. It's also my favorite line. Great work.
| Isca 12/8/09 . chapter 1
I love the opening stanza the best - the imagery is so genuine and well-described. :)
| Josh Rittenhouse 12/8/09 . chapter 1
I feel the same way at times.
I love how descriptive you are! My favorite part:
"You told me
you love me and the words dripped down on me
like watercolor, staining me in shades of
forget-me-not and solemn promise."
Brilliant! Don't ever stop writing!