|Reviews for The Random Bear and the Hare in his hair part 2|
| A Fire Rose 2/21/11 . chapter 1
That's quite the adventure! I sort of lost track of who John is, though. And one thing that can improve your stores is to show what is going on rather than simply list the events that are happening. But man, you have a serious gift for rhyming and rhythm (especially rhyming) that is rare these days. You would actually be great at writing childrens' books - something about those qualities rings true to them.
| atomic-pocket-watch 12/6/10 . chapter 1
this is so cool! definately a mighty boosh(ish) story! this has to be drug induced genius! :P