Vivid descriptions. You really have a way with words. I also like that part in the middle when the words are suddenly centered.

Cool... beatifully written and I love the way you layed it out. Interesting theme, very unique. Well done, you're a great writer!

from the Roadhouse :)

Wow. What works best in this is the way you were able to manipulate the restraints of FP to still convey that wonderful placement of the third stanza. It makes the poem twice as bold and it's also again, very unique. I found my thoughts wandering a little in the first paragraph but I really thing by the time you caught my attention with the second stanza I was more than willing to shape up and pay attention! I like the theme of reflection-not everyone likes looking in the mirror, so nice overall subject.