This is true.

No matter how close you get to someone... they will still have that sense of ... other.

But not having someone like that feels even worse.

Small wings but big talent. Reminds me of the bumblebee. The laws of physics say its wings are too small to lift its body. But the bumblebee never studied physics, so it just goes on flying.

I like the one that says you can find someone exactly like you and still be alone. Until I had a fictionpress account I had never read a Haiku, but now I've read thousands of them. Your style has improved.

SirScott

I like hoe 'feels' can be taken 2 different ways: 1) feel a in touch, and 2) feel as in emotions. :) So it adds 2 senses, as it were. :)

Thi one remind me of everyone, as you know, i wonder if true love really exists. :)

Beautiful idea! Seems to be about wanting and waiting for freedom. :)

I LOVE it. :)

This is really good! The way you simply described the process of a birthday just left me with streams of imagination at that final line. Good job on this!

painted

Aw, quite a bittersweet haiku! :( But great! Keep at it!

Anna _

Very true unfortunately. Great haiku! Keep writing!

Anna _

This is a profound thought well expressed in the haiku form.

Oh, this is rather macabre. I like it. The opening line, "He commands the dark," is particularly stunning. :)

I tend to avoid forms like the Haiku and Senryu because I'm not very good at them, haha xP But just a suggestion for your third one:

"yearning for an escape, and/but"

Getting rid of that hyphen and replacing it with a comma, followed by either "but" or "and" (depending on how you want it read), would remove that awkward glitch the hyphen creates.

Happy writing (:

Beautiful. Haunting. Love it.

I liked the imagery this presented to me. Great work.

I really liked this haiku. The image was nice. And cake. :D

this was is my favorite of the trio, I would say.

very captivating imagery and depth. nice job.