First off, is The coup de grâce, in his eyes, italian? Or french? LOL. I'm so bad with languages. Even my own.

ANYWAY! Aw Kayla! Dont sound so depressed. This guy is a jerk and isnt worth it! (haha Ive been saying that alot lately). it sounds like this guy has lied alot lately. He just says one thing and doing something else. Like being a liar and now you are just fedded up with it. AM i right?

Anyway, great poem! You really dont a great job with bringing the emotion to your poetry! :)

This is great, good vocabulary. Please write on!

Anna _