Hey I've read the end of chapter 3 and I'm going to start chapter 4 soon. I just want to say I think there is an interesting plot going on here, but I find that a lot of the characters do seem to come out sounding really mean. Maybe you did have to deal with people that are this mean in real life in your life, but I really do hope you can tone down the level of meanness a little bit in latter chapters. I mean, I really think the characters have a lot of potential and the chapters are holding very good continuity, so I think once the characters start becoming more lovable, it will improve a lot.

i do not understand this story it is getting weird

you have lost me is his sister his girlfriend?

So confused about the end of the chapter... here is my guess

1) only hope at finding love again

2) only hope to get out of some sort of mess or deal

3) only hope to prove he's not gay... haha I am just kidding. I so know that one is not true. Or is it... lol. Jk.

I don't have a clue... well, I will just have to read... :D

This was honestly a very well written and very moving story. The characters were not only wonderfully developed but wonderfully alive and real. I adore Bastain and Leon equally, and I can't wait to read the sequel! You are an amazing writer.

;-D

-Kate

This is one of the best stories ever! I think you should get this published because it its defiantly that good

Hey! I love your story :P this is like the third time Ive read it and I realized I have never done a revew..so I guess I'll make up for it by being your 400th reviewer! Keep up the awesome work!3

The story is great, but all the grammatical errors make it a little bit difficult to read at times. But I love the story!

This story is just wonderful. Suspense and every other thing I like! Thank you for posting this!

Just found this story.

Haven't read it yet. i will do that tonight.

Cheers!

oh now hes just a creeper and seriously weird maybe insane still liking Leon more

thats good shes spending time with her friends i really like Leon hes seems cute bastion uh i don't know hes seems really snobby and arrogant

im getting a twilight feeling here

cool start

hey new reader here i really enjoyed this story it was quite diffident to what i normally read i thought you'd end it like this but then to find out your doing a sequel to this is just great i really want to find if they will ever end up together so im off to read the sequel now