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| Reviews for frigid flames |
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   cab fed hig 1/17/11 . chapter 1"i blend in with the throng" "my status is theoretical" i like this thought too: "beauty stays intertwined between the lies, the dreams, the rain truth, i'll never find" |
| mzy 7/16/10 . chapter 1 This took my breath away. |
| tonight we bloom 12/14/09 . chapter 1 beautiful flow & imagery :) |
| Little girl Big world 12/12/09 . chapter 1 Ahh I am so jealous of your rhymes! This all just flowed together so well. My favorite part "candles flicker, shadows dance beauty stays intertwined between the lies" Amazing work :) I'm always happy to review! |
| steffxnie 12/12/09 . chapter 1 Great imagery. Love the flow. Each line is effective. They build up a very strong poem. Wonderful work. Keep writing! |
