| Reviews for falling in and out |
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nickyO 12/16/09 . chapter 1really good use of lower case letters and great image to thought. |
Manuel Fajar 12/13/09 . chapter 1One move, yours or mine? Fate knows how heartbeats were tossed, Revealed through love’s mists. Was it chess game blind? White square to black, then checkmate? Two & Fro motions? X's & O's—crossed Diagonally to form, A line leading, where? Tarot cards thrown down, Heart's fortune forecast before,— Love's whims will survive. Spilikins’ your game, My game always Mikado,— Was it just the name? |