Oh my God, This is AMAZING! Great Job!

I liked this. I like things that make me feel a little uncomfortable. Poor Tyler. I love the way he was thinking about what he wanted to do to his uncle, particularly the part about wanting to see his blood elsewhere but inside his throbbing veins. That was particularly telling of what Tyler had perhaps gone through.

You did really well with the dialogue and making it apparent that neither of your characters meant what they said.

this was creepy, but good.

i can understand Tyler. i was never messed with by a family member, but i have been in the situation of being forced into the presence of someone who hurt me and had to be cool about it. it royally sucked.

Is it complete? I hope not. _

I like this. :P