i've been wanting to read a story on avpd. but i thought because we hide away from people and things that maybe no one would really have, since perhaps there wouldn't be that interesting of a story to tell. at least for someone with a severe case. i hope i can find more of these. this is great and sad.

that is so sad!

I wonder how many times this happens? Someone just so innocent or devoted that they don't care about a few hits and the dishonesty. I can't help but see this as intresting and horrible at the same time. I applaud you.

I very much like your writing style, by the way.

Oh, and your profile that you have currently.

Luck with life, and ect.

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I really like the whole idea of this story and this first chapter is a really good start. Poor Rosie! Not did he get hit but was left as well! I'm so interested to see where this goes and if things work out for Rosie.

This story... is AMAZING.

I really love the way you wrote it.

I actually don't know what exactly I love about it. I just love it. :)

i can't believe he left! they were a cute couple! whats rosie going to do now?

honey.

i love you.

but your a meanie. D

poor rosie.

I have AvPD, so while I was reading I was looking for elements, of course. I love how it didn't appear until the very end. At first, I thought Rosie was going to have it and was a bit weirded out, but the way you brought it in was great. I'm really interested to see where this goes- AvPD is complex, so there are a lot of possibilities.