I like the use of equation, very good.

I like how you used houses to hide the sun because we usually think of clouds as hiding the sun and thus it works perfectly with the title. Good job.

great snapshot of a moment :)

"Smiles faded from the years" - well written in its heartbreak

I love Haikus.

So little words, it's an awesome thing when you can take the word limit and make something powerful out of it.

Which you did.

You should write more Haikus, Tim. :)

Hey, I haven't checked my account in years but I saw that you left a review for me recently (as in six months ago, haha) and so I wanted to thank you. :D I like this haiku in particular, the tumble weeds evoke a lot of interesting imagery and emotion. Keep writing!

omg! im soo sorry! i hope it gets better soon! i really know what ur going through! just try to make it through and i hope it get better.

Hope your transition is full of joy. Thank you for writing, I've enjoyed reading and I look forward to your future works.

casting aside "old delusions" is like the opening of the door, so good job.

That's funny. Why? My perception as a reader is that I read a haiku on 'delusions' right after a haiku on 'a pleasant reunion with loved ones'. Were haiku 20 and 21 related?

The rhyme and rhythm work together so well. A finely crafted haiku!

Hm... to answer your question, it brings to my mind the feeling of taking a long walk in a barren neighbourhood, past sleeptime ;) Alone, and wanting to be alone to muse upon various events.

I agree with you A/N - sometimes you don't feel like labeling something. I think that's part of the artistic process, right? Our priviledge as creators.

Anyhow, I loved this haiku, and I feel like it would also sound quite nice with 'fears' instead of just 'fear'. Because, they hunt in packs, we all know that!

Amazing use of alliteration.

Wow. I can relate to that so much. I think you've done an amazing job at writing so simple yet so effective a poem.