|Reviews for You are my light, I just can't see it yet|
| Alsles 5/17/10 . chapter 6
Hey, I'm sorry to hear that you won't be updating for awhile. I'm looking forward to reading more. You left off on quite the cliffhanger.
The only real comment I have is that your story is moving at a very fast pace. It would be nice to have some downtime with Renatta and Myron (if they end up together). Every time they have time alone, they're interrupted right away. Having them get to know one another a little better would benefit both your characters and your readers.
Other than that, your plot is interesting as of now, and I'm intrigued about who it is that is coming after Renatta. Her brother?