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CNGB 12/7/10 . chapter 1Were you sad when you wrote this poem? Anyway, it was good! |
Loss of Words 10/27/10 . chapter 1Hm, I like the direction and feeling of this poem. Iz naice. I really enjoyed the lines, "The sky is not grey, Just a lighter shade of sapphire." My only suggestion is to recheck your grammar. "Wipe away your tears; It will be okay." "Get lost away with me" feels like an awkward line. What about something like, "Grab my umbrella, Come get lost with me." Keep up the good work, I like the hopefulness of this poem. :) |