|Reviews for It will be okay|
| CNGB 12/7/10 . chapter 1
Were you sad when you wrote this poem? Anyway, it was good!
| Loss of Words 10/27/10 . chapter 1
Hm, I like the direction and feeling of this poem. Iz naice.
I really enjoyed the lines,
"The sky is not grey,
Just a lighter shade of sapphire."
My only suggestion is to recheck your grammar.
"Wipe away your tears;
It will be okay."
"Get lost away with me" feels like an awkward line.
What about something like,
"Grab my umbrella,
Come get lost with me."
Keep up the good work, I like the hopefulness of this poem. :)