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| Bage 2/23/10 . chapter 1
FIRST, BITCH! I NOW RULE THIS REVIEW PAGE!
That out of the way, I must congratulate you for your great sense of rhythm, here. The imagery you use as well as the feelings present in the words is wonderful, and considering it was also written on the spur of the moment, I consider this and epic win. Nothing to nitpick at, though... kind of disappointing for me, really... :\
Your ever so loveable critic,