I liked how there was a subtle yet forceful sexual energy behind this. It wasn't crude or cheesy either and the writing was casual enough to be able to connect to it yet poetic enough that I could distance myself at the same time. Nicely done.

This has such beautiful imagery. Especially at the beginning, the contrasts of "rain" and "rusty" were powerful.

I also love the tone of this. It's bitter and regretful, but with an obvious strength behind it.

[babybaby don’t you know why they call it

“falling”?] Great lines. Probably my favorite in the piece.

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