I LOVE THIS- It's so dang epic to the point i'm jealous cuz my writing and drawing stinks XD Ah well. This could be turned into a manga or a book without pictures like it already is and you could publish it! I know for freakin' sure i'd buy it!
I feel weird saying this but i like Yui with either: Kaito, Shiro, Yuuki, or Akira. Or ta' evil coach XD Anyway I loved it and I wait for the next chapter of 100% epicness!

i like this one, i tend to laugh alot with each chapter and have actually bothered to check when u update

thnx
ericaangel

But, I don't know, there's just something about Koji that attracts me to him. Maybe it's his bad ass personality? XD Or that I imagine him as super hot lol And yeah, I feel bad for Ryo especially since Yuuki knows. And really? Good because I think I could spend weeks or months with Shiro and my as...well anywho! Yeah, I've got sports training all summer so barely any free time ever, which sucks -_- you?

Oh. My. God.

My stomach hurt the entire time I was reading this because I knew terrible things were going to happen to poor Yui. Wow. This was so dark.. and a lot more emotional than some were. I actuallywanted to cry several times, mostly when Akira comes up... Ahw... *tear* I was going to review last chapter, because i read it almost as soon as you posted it due to coincidence, but then i forgot and yeah. But this chapter was amazing! iloved the review for Umeko that Yuuki made Yui read.

Bow down to me Fictionpress as i have gotten you to work! I'm good, onto your wonderful story.
Cute is a synonym for evil, yes that seems to be very, very, very overly accurate in this story. So we now have evil twin cousins of Shouta, poor Yui, her roommate, who seemed very normal, easy going and laid back, has dark and twisted family members. Hold on Yui, you can survive, you have so far for 72 whole chapters.
Oddly enough reading "I have the right to refuse to answer any questions that might incriminate me" seemed very familiar as I read your response to my review. Hmm...perhaps Yuuki is like half your soul, only I'm guessing more evil. I hope he's more evil then you, but you're not likely to respond due to the right not to incriminate yourself, which I totally understand. Plausible deniability is key. As well as claiming any fight as self defense.
Oh! As this comes to mind, do you have a character chart or something to keep all these people straight? I mean I'm pretty sure your pushing forty something influential character not to mention Yui. Plus the voices inside her head, I find when I talk to myself I get the right answers but for Yui, I'm pretty sure her sanity breaks more. Back to the topic of all the characters you have to keep straight, do you group them together based on evilness? Like Yuuki and the Twins are end of the world evil while Ryo is just sanity breaking evil.
Wow, Yuuki's not god? Well I kind of figured that already, God seems to "good" for Yuuki. But the devil is too "evil" or "dark" for Yuuki. So he's like a creepy, twisted, demented fallen angel corrupted by the devil.
I really need to stop reading your story at random parts of the day when my mother is watching television less than ten feet away, I was laughing my ass off at all the wrong times of the show causing my mother to look at me in a horrifying manner. Yeah, it's not good to laugh during a child's funeral. But I enjoyed this chapter as well.
The ice cream special was on the History Channel. Apparently ice cream is a modern marvel.
PS "Onii-chan" older brother "Onee-chan" older sister Seeing as Yuuki keeps calling Yui onii-chan in the story even though in earlier chapters he was calling her Onee-chan.

i love this story! i was thinking it might be helpful to have a list of characters and their relation to yui because with so many characters it gets hard to remember who is who when someone pops back in the picture.

LOL, awesome! Update soon!

lol, the whole time I read this chapter I kept thinking that she should go to her mom. If her mom scares Yuuki, maybe she can scare the twins as well. Anyway, I really liked this chapter. Poor Shouta is so scared and helpless, and now Akira is gonna think Yui is a pimp! Rofl

Please update soon, this is such a good story. It deserves each and every review of the 1000 you have! It should be OVER 9000! lol horrible joke...

*shivers in fear and excitement*
I KANT WATE FOR MOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAR! \([]\)

And, again, I love the new chapter! It's intriguing, and Akira, what a twist! I no longer have any idea who Yui will end up with. I used to think it would be Kaito, but now I'm not so sure . . . anyways, you've once again enchanted me with this story! Bye for now, hopw to read more soon!

Woops, my last review jacked up! Let's try again!

Yours Truly: Yes! I'll hold on and wait until your dad lets you have a Deviant Art account. I hope he lets you have an account soon! Why is he against you having one, anyways? And then you said that you read all of the reviews, do you mean everybody's? As for Koji enrolling in school, I have to say that I didn't think of that. It would be a huge coincidence since Koji's dad doesn't know who "Umeko" is, but I'll think about it. And I'm glad you like the EVIL little girl.

My dad thinks I'll get obsessed with dA ( I dothat a lot). So for now he's contemplating but I think he'll say yes.

I read as many reviews as I can until I form a headache. I also like reading your responses to reviews. (both are extremely funny XD) your reviewers may be more insane than you.

Ha ha yeah buuuuut it would be hilarious and what do you want to bet Koji would link 2 and 2 together?

I did like her! Eviiiiiiiiiiiiil.

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As for this chapter, I think I'm the one who said to use villainous cuteness. XD I'm not sure though... BUT YEAH I love this and noooooo Akira my sweet it's not what you think. ... Oh no. Those cute girls are never going to leave Yui's side. I can see them doing what she did, just to be merciless. I'm glad she's feeling real fear instead of humiliation fear; it's a nice break. AND TELL US WHAT THEY DID TO SHOUTA. 'Cute is just a synonym for evil' XD that's officially my official new catchphrase of officialness.

AKIRAAAAA I LOVE YOU AND CAPS LOCK!

You had Yuis first kiss DON'T YOU DARE GIVE HER UP. I... I think he was her first kiss.

Well, yeah, it was supposed to be a compliment...Not super; MEGA long...(That probably didn't make any sense..) Now that I've read this chapter the twins...I feel even more sorry for him. Poor, poor Shouta...What in the world did they do to him? 'How bad was it?'
"..."
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...Not as bad as this...but still...
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Bad.
...either way, great chapter as usual!

so which set is more devious, Yuuki's twin sisters or Shouta's twin cousins? LOL

Ryo is nice and all but I'm not happy by the fact that Yui can at least openly admit her feelings to herself and to him and act it out but not her feelings for our other contenders, especially the ones whom she met first *pout*

oh finally, someone who isn't enamored with our heroine, hee. that'll put a spin on things. hmm, but if he'll get interested in her later on, it's fine as well i guess