Love the chapter and there are several similarities between the two. My friend is a girly boy, he digs up information from unknown sources, I swear he will end up stealing someones soul someday hes not at Yuukis level yet since he is a give or take a few years younger than him, and he will end up ruling the world someday. So hes like a mini Yuuki.

I Love your story! It's so Awesome! DX

yay! I'm so glad that there was soccer in this chapter! Because, ya know, that's kinda why this story was started in the beginning, haha. Omigosh. This is the anniversary for when I first started reading this story! Exactly a year from today! that's so exciting. Anywho, I love your story more than ever. I'm glad you had yuuki ask for cake. That made me think alllllll the way back to one of the first chapters when he's talking to her about cookies or whatever it was, haha. Wow, so much stuffs to remember! and go Ayano for saving Yui! I wanted her life to go back to normal, I was a bit scared of the way it was going... O.O Thank goodness she wasn't taken to Switzerland. And go the amazing Yuuki! Hey, we haven't seen Kaito for a while... I feel like this is kinda like, a rant of randomness, so I shall end it. Thank you so much for the wonderful update, I love your story for forever, and it gets better everytime I read it :D

Definitely cute . I like the way your story flows together, keeping you on the edge of your seat, waiting for what happens next. Mmm something I thought I would point out, not techically critisism, just something I wanted to say. I'm not sure if you wanted to base your scenario in Japan or not, but since you have japanese names, I thought I should point out how they say names. They always use the last name first. In example: you say yui suzuki, but in Japan, her name would be said as suzuki yui. Just thought I'd point that out in case you actually had your scenario in Japan, so it would seem more realistic . But overall nice job!

Loveing it! I can't help but wonder who Yui is going to end up with. The age old question . . . Anyways, the connection park was good. I was almost hoping Yui would get stuck on a plane to switzerland and someone would have to come find her or something. Preferably rei or yuuki.

Yuuki saves the day. I love him so much. Yuuki can rule the world in my opinion, but I'm not underestimating Nanami, or Ayano. People from Yui-chan/kun's past. Delicious. and lastly Seisui won. So happy.

Is it bad that I sort of wanted to see Yui's friends showdown with the Twins? But given that Ayano is like the Immortal Primordial Beast Empress, I don't think that's a good idea. We would all die.

Good job on the chapter. I'm already in collage so I know how you're currently feeling. Good luck.

omg i absolutely LOVE this story! and im really glad ayumi and fumi were defeated. they were way worse than yuuki-who i now like!

and congrats on college! i know the feeling of ggoing from homeschool to school. im now in grade 10, be4 which i was hommeschooled. its easier to switch than u think. good luck!

i would love to see this animated! its such a cool story, and the characters are really fun. i just cant stop reading!

Good gracious! An ending that isn't horrifyingly cliffhanger-ish... It's been a while wince the last of /those/.

Congrats on college! I've still got a year, but the stress has already started :/

for a second there, I thought Yui was going to Switzerland! But Yuuki to the rescue! I particularly liked the end of the chapter. Thanks for updating.

Yuuki's cuteness is amazing. i wish he was my friend...

go Yui! she came out victorious from the twins! good for her!

great chapter! loved it!

xxxx andy

And so Yuuki saves what little sanity Yui has left!

Heh, 'Friend with slight minion tendencies?' I really admire you for writing such a story for so long without dropping it. I mean, not many authors do that! And it just so happened this story is in my top 10 favourite stories in Fictionpress/Fanfiction, so I'm really glad you haven't dropped it.

Seriously. This story made my day the first time I read it. Keep it up!

Oh gosh, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE TWINS. So much. Like, I don't even know. They're the best. Though I still like everyone else too. I'm so confused for my favorites.

Okay, great game! Seriously awesome match! I'm curious as to what you're going to do with Momo Koga.

Ah, the prince act was great, and I had a sneaking suspicion that it was going to be Ayano who scared the twins off Yuuki is so awesome! :D

I wanna see Shiro and Kazuo again soon though. :3 Of course, with the current situation-you know, Yuuki and Yui just...lying on a bed-things could turn...interesting.

And I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter! And good luck in college! Homeschoolers for the win, by the way.

AWESOME! IT'S HARD TO EXPLAIN HOW MUCH I LOOOOOVE THIS SERIES! WHENEVER THAT EMAIL POPS UP I SQUEE WITH EXCITEMENT! (sorry for my caps... :D)

I did not know you were home schooled. I am as well.
I thought she was like Ritsu as well.
I think that you should let the story end at the natural point and not rush it. This is merely my opinion. You need not listen.
I do not mind that there is not much about the soccer in the the story. If the summary did not hint at the story being amusing I would have been put off by the soccer.
I could not care less about Kaito. This is simply because he is not interesting enough to be the sort of character I am interested in. Again this is merely my opinion.
I do agree that your story is the sort to be read again and still be entertaining.

Holy shit. I completely forgot about her mother being scary as shit. This was simply amazing. She was dead into the soccer game and everything. Yuuki really is a good friend and before he leap at her he seemed to be less childish and somewhat mischievious and hot and matured like his actual age instead of an evil little kid. I loved this story, update soon.