Well, I already told you how much I love this. I love your style once again. I am glad that the son somehow found the father. The father and son cried together...but them just hugging and crying...so sweet. Then that young girl's boyfriend...Oh, what a jerk! I told you how rude, mean, and stupid he is, right? Well, I love how you slipped in the lyrics here. Great story Love it 100%!

Sad! But I really enjoyed it. Really well written.

Hey,

Aw this was sad :( I really liked this, how it was so not cliche :) I loved the meaningfulness and I loved how you wrote it so well and thoughtfully. Great work!

ranDUMM

Aw, that's so sad. But such a beautifully sad story it is.

The old man reminded me very much of Scrooge, and I like how his story was not very Scrooge-ish at all. It was sad, but felt real. And the flashback was done very nicely.

The ending was perfect. The use of O Holy Night throughout really helped bring the story together as well.

This is a great piece and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job. :]