It doesn't need to rhyme to be amazing.

Actually, most of the best, heartfelt poems don't rhyme.

Which is why I adore this, very much. :)

Why do you think it sucks? It DOES NOT suck! It actually got to me, it's very inspirational. Well, I mean, I felt like I knew exactly what you were trying to convey in this poem. I can relate to this a lot.

Good work on this, even if you don't like it. Because I like it.

-dontneedyou

i really liked the theme/message/story. true it doesn't rhyme but who cares? free verse! m... inspiring content though, very close to the heart.

I like how you show the emotion, for me it is very easy to relate to.

Yeah, it doesn't rhyme, but no, poems don't always have to rhyme... I don't think it's weird; it obviously came from the heart. Some parts don't make sense, but I guess it's ok. The poem has a good rhythm to it, rhyming or not. Very unique piece of literature.