I like he bolding to make certain words stand out.

I can relate to the fourth stanza very much.

Well written

Beautiful piece.

I love your word choice, and the flow of the whole piece.

Kudos, CD

i like this one.

my favorite line is definetly this one:

"colors become brilliant and

my words, lose themselves

around the edges of your tongue."

oh, and just a little friendly tip:

you spelled because wrong in the last two lines.

otherwise, this was very well done.

razorwire lover.