|Reviews for You're Stepping on my Heart|
| Amber Akasha 5/1/11 . chapter 1
It may not be Christmas now, but I'll take it as a late gift ;) (though it is a shame it's over. I can see the seeds of a great story in the frozen, snow-covered ground)
And again... amazing. I feel sorry for John, but his brother is so much hotter (and interesting, and hell I love that character!) .
So, merry late Christmas!
| cellotape 8/20/10 . chapter 1
oh no.. poor john :(
| c 5/16/10 . chapter 1
| kazoua 1/1/10 . chapter 1
I am the only one awake, new years day, because i'm a loser and can't stay up past 12:30.
I would actually love to see this story set up in a longer story. You had this really great set up, the beginning and the way the main screwed with both brothers, but it seemed to... disolve? I can't think of a good adjective. Several of the expected points just sorta, iono, disapear.
| ilovekarrots 12/30/09 . chapter 1
| Caseus 12/24/09 . chapter 1
F WHAT A SLUT.
Love anyways (: