Whoa! This was really really cool! I liked how you split up the quote, and the driver's thinking in the middle there. It was really effective in making it suspenseful, and I got that the driver was trying to think of the road instead of listening to what the couple was saying. Loved it ).

Hey,

This was an awesome piece! Your imagery was absolutely GORGEOUS, and no joke when I say some of the best I've read; it wasn't over done, but it wasn't shallow either; gorgeous :) Great work on this! :)

ranDUMM