You write a very interesting story. I've faved it and will keep up with it as much as I can. I love your plotline so far and your talent for building suspense-a skill that most writers (like me) lack.

My only quibble is exposition-it's your friend! Sometimes, things happen a little too quickly and I have to go back and read it again to see what actually happened. but if it's your intention to make things a little vague, by all means keep doing it. It's really cool.

keep writin'

sugar

ps: check out Maddening, my novel-in-progress! ;D