I know I have reivewed this before... but...

Will you continue with the saga/series? Because I honestly wanted to hear more about Dante! Maybe... someday... you will? Please? :D

Loved it loved it loved it loved it and oh did Msntion I loved this?! :)

This is truly an amazing story. Perfect detail, lovely wording, and beautiful similes and metaphors. I truly love the plot and the suspense. It keeps you on edge and PERFECT grammar. Most of the stories I read(good or not) have alot of typos. But not yours, I can tell you read over your work before posting it, alot of writers don't although that is an important quality. Great descriptions, I can really visualize the character in my head. Continue writing and ignore haters, you are a gorgeous author.

This story seems rather rushed throughout every chapter. Some of it is also highly confusing, and it doesn't really seem to fit in with the rest of the story line. In fact, there seems to be three story lines within one book, each of them with their own alternating chapters. It can get a little confusing when you're reading about Aurora and then it switches to Hellsa or Sinclair or Rayne the next chapter. None of that really seems to tie in with the main story line.

I also noted a few small grammatical errors, and the sometimes excessive use of one person's name.

Other than that, I think the plot is very interesting, and I enjoyed the read despite the confusion.

Inauspicious Stars

Hello there! I wanted to tell you how much I admire your "Sand and blood" story. It's really interesting and I promise to check out your other work. :) Kepp on writing!

Imagery was fantastic and the way you described your characters was marvalous. Everyone had a distinct personality.

There were a few minor errors, nothing too distracting but there were a few times when you switched from past tense to present tense for some reason. Be sure to keep those straight.

I like your writing style!

There is some repetition as you seem to scrounge for ways to replace names, but it doesn't stick out as much as most stories on here do. I have to ask though, did you use a french translator? The grammar seems a bit awkward, but that could just be me. I'm not very good at french myself, though, so I could be completely wrong!

I really believe that this story is beautifully written, and that you define the characters very well. is this going to turn into a love story at some point along the way, or is it going to stay as a horror/suspense?