In a messed up way, I really quite like this. How innocently it seems to start and then it really hits you. Great work, once again :)

WOW..that was firetrucking awesome...in a strange way _

I'll start off with this one as an ice breaker, because I think we both know this one pretty well...

Don't expect anything too in depth; I'm just getting started ;)

Ohh how those needles ARE helpful. What brilliant ideas... we should put them into use someday. I almost hit "report possible abuse" for irony's sake. Super awesome, I'll be checking out some of your other work now.

Cheers,

Marque

This is totally awesome! Based on a real conversation? Must have been some kind of conversation... Wow. Great work!

ohh really fun and really good

o.o ... That was really twisted and morbid...

Awesome!

Remind me not to come to any of your sleepovers.

Though I'm pretty sure the victim would have bled to death somewhere between stanzas eight and ten.

interesting, very interesting.

Although I really didn't feel any 'holy crap!' moment it was more like a

'another torture story...okay'

but still it was good.

silent-anthem

Ooh, fun.

It's a nice little guide to torture, but still nothing unexpected. I was hoping for some kind "wow" factor, but I do like the way it's arranged almost in a poem format.

Good stuff. :)

AWESOME