First and foremost - the first part drowned me. But I actually liked the last part of the story. )

Yay!I'm the first to review!

The story was nice!But some sentences I found too long and I didn't really enjoy the middle part that much 'cause it seemed as thought the main character was rambling on and on about his life.

Other than that I find this story quite of the stuff you mentioned in the story I totally agree with and there were some parts which made me job!