This is a very cute story so far. I can't wait to read more.

well...this is an awesome piece...i have encountered...a big applause...liked the detailing, descriptive,fits your genre,ur a grammatical hero,good sizable paragraphs, and interesting read...hats of...though you have lot of scope for improvement...

Hunh...

Nicely done on this story. I expect more in the next chapter.

cool, interesting. althougth you could pick more interesting names, no offence or anything. could you read mine, im afraid no one likes it i need to know whats wrong besides spelling errors

I like it so far!:)

'of course do to his reputation' -due

'about her respond'-response

'let out a light sighed'-sigh

'think that is ridicules,'-ridulous

'As of females,'-as for

Do you speak Italian? Hmm.. maybe she shouldnt have left the dinner the guy sounded really hot! Trent likes her doesnt he? And Conrad? Trent's perfect she should marry him!

i really like the overall idea of the story, there are a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing too overwhelming. Keep up the good work, and keep writing. I would love a few reviews myself too please :)

Loved it, update soon!

Great story...! Hope you can UPDATE SOON;)

Love it so far, update soon!

Is Duncan the guy? He's on people magazine? Really great start cant wait until you write more!

This looks like a really cute story. I like it so far.

- Narsha

Fun set up. :D And it's not a cliched kind of opening, with her having to get married. I want to see where it goes. Please and thank you!

This story sones great! I hope you continue!

Please continue this. I liked it. )