good story, i hope it will continue sometime.

great story:)

Oh Jordan what have you done? I cant wait for more :)

Woah o.o

He screwed up big time...

But hey, we all do!

I'm so loving this! You're doing an amazing job! :D

Keep it up!

Yes, I honestly have nothing to say xD

I really don't like the way you're developing Jordan. I can't tell if he's supposed to be a good character or a bad one. He's too complicated. Because you made it sound like he's bad in the summary and the first chapter, but now he's being nice. So that doesn't make sense. I can't get a grip on his motivations. You should clear that up. People, especially teenagers, just aren't that deep. HE needs to pick a side.

I don't think your concept is very original, ether. Your characters are all stereotype. You shoudl do something about them.

Great job!

Yep, I am so relating to this at the moment.

Jordan still reminds me of my athletic girl crush, and now that he's insulting Sam, it's just making me more and more nostalgic. 'Coz she used to do that to me all the time, only she was actually meaning every word, since she did it because I was being stubborn and idiotic, and did it so that I could actually see 'the error of my ways'.

Yeah...

This is a good chapter. I love their friendship! It's so...unique...OK not that unique, but pretty different from other friendships all the same.

Good job :)

This is really good. It should have so many more reviews than it does.

I think that the sick asshole who did that was just jealous of your work...

You are awesome and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise :)

If you need anything, PM Me ;)

Awesome story, by the way. Getting better and better :D

It's just like my experience with my best friend...o.o

Good job :D

I've really enjoyed reading this! Can't wait for more :)

I don't know who the fuck you think you are calling someone else a bitch. You're the stupid, egotistical whore in this situation. Yeah, you didn't submit those reviews but you might as well have. You're just a sad, pathetic little slut trying to sound smart. Well, guess what? FUCK YOU and your condescending bullshit!

And don't even pretend like you don't know what you did. We both do. And no, I don't know you in real life, even though I bet you're the same dickwad in real life.

Oh I Like this :D

Please update soon

Good story :D

Haha, I love Sam as well. He's an interesting character. An enigma of sorts.

Is it okay if I hate Jordan? Because I kind of do.