This is a great poem! It was sweet, and I especially liked the last line Beware a gold cobra with ruby eyes. I am glad that you have written it in the style of Rudyard Kipling. It was really beautiful and lyrical! Great job!

Very good. I think Kipling would have approved of it.

I thought this poem was absolutely adorable! The rhythm was almost perfect and the story was consistent, as well as greatly entertaining. Great job!