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| Reviews for Insatiable: Breathe |
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   Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 10Love it! "You see writing is my vice. You see the pen is my knife and the paper is my skin- I like to carve my pain into it and watch my words bleed." |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 9 Love it! |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 8 Love it! "My eyes drink you in since you glow in the light of the moon as her light kisses your flesh." |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 7 Great! |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 6 Love it! |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 5 Great! "I love to be beneath your powerful lithe frame. Hear low growls and your warm breath on my neck as you sink your teeth into me." |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 4 Great! |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 3 Great! "I want to be the girl you wake next to at every dawn. The girl you tell your friends about- that I'm the one you can never leave." "Wake me if you're real, baby. If not- just let me sleep." |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 2 Love it! "I won't open my eyes so you won't fade away in the light of day. The doubt wash away with your smile, and I know that only I can put it there." |
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 1/16/10 . chapter 1 Great! "I've never let anyone into this room before. Why are you the first?" |
| FelleLLoyd 1/4/10 . chapter 4 Hm, I think I've read this before.(Is This The Edited Version?) Though, I think I prefer the original one. |
| Mirabella 1/3/10 . chapter 2 This is my favourite so far! "under the stars- a blanket sky." - lovely! "Dusk sets in with your embrace" - beautiful! |
| Mirabella 1/3/10 . chapter 1 Wonderful! "The pieces of me I kept safe from the world" - you had me at the opening line! :) |
| Princess-anna57 1/1/10 . chapter 2 Great job. I like the first stanza best. Keep at it! Anna _ |
| Princess-anna57 1/1/10 . chapter 1 Very good poem and I like the last stanza; it's very powerful to me. Keep writing! Anna _ |
