I love this. I can relate to it so, so much. This, to me, is a story of hope that, left to die, rotted and shriveled to nothing. And I *love* it. I'm not just using love as a substitute for like. :)

I haven't ever looked at your stories. And I love them. You're my role model. You reviewed one of my stories - I'm "Liz" from One Track Minds On Fire. Please take a look at my stories - they're just a selection of things I've bothered to copy out of notebooks. I'd really appreciate your opinion.

lots of love and laughs

x

I understand it. I don't think i can explain it.. but i know i understand it :)

I like it . it is dark moody and a reminder of how deep thoughtful so easily get forgotten in this shallow mean spirited world

Thank you for shareing your work

Loved it.

"She haunts the hallways." I like the ghostly melancholy here.

"She is broken." Utterly raw.

"She is alone." Perfect ending.

This was... utterly breaktaking and simply flawless. I'm in no way experienced to critique poetry but Jesus Christ! Amazing work, brilliant! I'm jus wowed. It was filled with heart clenching emotion, exactly like something I would have love to write. Flawless, perfect, memorable. Great work! :)