wow this is um and um ya and yes

"The night is closing in." I love the tone of this opening line - it's so wonderfully angsty and captivating.

"The dark ocean of regret that sleeps inside of me." Nice phrasing. I particularly like "sleeps inside of me " - that's a unique image :).

Wow. I sometimes feel that way.

Aw, we all feel like this at some point. Always be positive. Write on please :)

Anna _

Never regret anything that made you smile. I forget who said this, but it is one of my favs.

I like your poem. It has beauty. I am sure you do, too.