|Reviews for The Nothing That You Mean|
| Nyrihaz 1/3/10 . chapter 1
You just described... wow, I couldn't find words to express what I felt right now but you found them very well.
"Baby, I never expected you to love me, and yet it holds
such a bitter,sickening, horrible, utter disaster." - exactly, exactly how I feel.
"The adoration of a hopeful (stupid) dreamer." -yes, that exactly I was (am)...
Now I have tears in my eyes again...
Nicely, heart-breaking done.
Nyrihaz (and her broken heart)
| Lily Laurence 1/3/10 . chapter 1
Truly beautiful. I think your writing really connects, flows from each verse to create meaning. I also like how you staggered the stanzas; that's a good technique for the reader to feel what the writer does. Keep writing.