Thanks for your review awhile back! Sorry it took me so long to return the favor.

You say "soaks" and "brings" but it refers back to teardrops, which is plural so it should be "soak" and "bring."

I like the piece. I think the format works well here and I like the way you have pitter patter and drip drop. Nicely done.

PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile.)

This is very nice, it's short and sweet. Also, I like the onomatopoeias.

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