| Reviews for Milk Chocolate Bars |
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Lady Sakaki 7/13/10 . chapter 1Ha! The title caught my attention because I love chocolate! :3 I'm amazed at how well you captured and shaped the dad's character in such a short work! The tone of the piece has so many turns in it...humor, matter-of-fact-statements...I'm kinda jealous... One thing..."Make a list, and estimate the for more productive shopping trips." Missing word/typo in the middle of the sentence...? Thanks for the awesome read! - |