Wow... *Applaud* I'm actually very sad that it's already over... But you totally did an undeniably good job! Really, if you would send this to a publisher, it would probably be put on sale! Well, I hope there is a sequel ;) but if not, I've read a LOT of books, but this is the best story ever. (And no, i'm not exaggerating.) OK, you just got yourself a lifetime-profilestalker because of this story. Waiting for your next work.

A great chapter! Again! When will you learn to write bad so i don't feel the urge to check your profile everyday for an update? (Oh, about that, UPDATE ABSOLUTELY NEEDED! I know, i'm annoying the living hell out of you ;) keep up the good work!)

What a place to leave the story. Looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!

Wow, another great chapter! YAY! I'll keep checking your profile everyday for the next update! Good luck!

Another great chapter! Keep it up! Best story ever, it's alomost addictive! Please update as soon as possible!

A, for the most part, sweet chapter, though there is a lot of possible shitstorms that could come up. Look forward to the next chappie.

To tell you the truth, I don't know how one can be capable of writing a story this good. It drags me in for several reasons. Keep writing like this, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Of course you already knew this, but stories can really help people out.

Keep updating!

Still a flawlessly good story, already waiting for the update!

I love everything I read, but somehow I like this story most. Please update again soon!

Nice to come back to 2 chapters, It's good so far, can't wait to see where this goes next

Please update soon.

Interesting story.

I don't exactly remember if I've ever read this story before. (well, maybe perhaps the plot have changed? or the style to portray this story have changed?)

But, despite that :D

Or regardless of that. Haha

Your story is really good. I'm awfully surprised I'm the first to review (this version at least. I'm rather sure I've reviewed for the previous version(s))

I really like your writing style. :D And I especially loved the line "A whisper wasted on a quiet night sky" - The moment I read that line, I had this 'full' and complete image of how that feels and looks in my mind. - Point is: You write really well. And this story is really good. And I really like it. And that you should REALLY update soon. :D

I'm an impatient girl. hehehe.

P.s: I'd LOVE to read your previous versions, I'm fairly sure I'll be really satisfied with them. Ahahaha. This story is Amazing.