I don't know your previous version, but I do know that I like this story very much. I've read the following stories as well and I'm favouring them all. I think you've done a very good job describing loneliness and bonedeep heartache. Thanks for sharing.

I liked all of them. I don't usually review but I thought this deserved a review and found it weird that there was none. I found this story by casuality and I actually read the last one first, I thought it was nice but that I was missing something, then found the other stories.

Anyway I loved your Kyle series, the character's are really loveable and I it's got a nice life kind of feeling seeing how Kyle could live old and get over his past grief.

Anyway, loved it