|Reviews for The Ones Who Matter Most|
| Rosetta Penn 1/12/10 . chapter 1
I love that you write this for your friends, it's very sweet. I'm happy for you that you've found a group of people you enjoy being around.
However I also can't help but notice only the last stanza is about them. I've noticed the same bitterness in some of your other poems too. I thought about what you said in your review of my story, (thank you!), and I guess maybe my only advice for you is to focus on the positive as well.