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FloraIrmaTylee 12/31/12 . chapter 1It's cute, sad, touching and inspiring all at once. All these gay and lesbian people getting bullied is just heartbreaking though. Well honestly I've never met a gay or lesbian person, but I know there is nothing wrong with them, like my little sister says. She is the wrong one. lovely story. A tad confusing but I like it veery much. |
lulu234 10/13/12 . chapter 1That was super good there were a few mistakes but it didn't take away from the overall beauty of the story. I loved the ending too. The only thing I could is that you might could've developed the bullies character more the best kinds of villains are the ones who have reasons to be evil or in this case a bully. But it really was fantastic you did a great job making me feel what the main character was feeling which is hard to do in 1st person sometimes. |
Kira 8/31/12 . chapter 1 Too cute! |
T. Ishmon 8/23/12 . chapter 1Nice story, short and sweet. I usually dont comment but this one deserved it. |
Fumiki 10/10/11 . chapter 1It's cute :3 This story deserves more chapter though. I mean, where is Teagan whenever he didn't show up? Why can't Eva talk? Why did he always wore jacket with hood up? Oh whatever it is, I love this, it's so cute :D You should post more story anyway. I'll definitely read it :) |
HeavensInferno 2/26/11 . chapter 1This was such a sweet story. I love how Eva and Teagan interact and how the story flowed really naturally. |
xClosed 9/18/10 . chapter 1This was so cute that my brain may have just exploded a little. |
LittleMissMurdered 7/21/10 . chapter 1That's really cute and highly inspirational, especially in my time of struggle right now. I have an autistic younger brother, so it's awesome being able to read other people's views on different forms of special needs and disabilities. The story was great. (: |
Theories of Insomnia 3/21/10 . chapter 1Very good, I liked it. I liked how casual their relationship was, not too intense/dramatic/fluffy. Great amount. |
infinite silence 1/29/10 . chapter 1i liked it. |
i-wish-i-had-wings 1/22/10 . chapter 1too sweet for words! the way they interact with each other.. *-* |
Chryssa'2305 1/14/10 . chapter 1Aw! That was so cute! Very well written. You express emotion very well. :) What happened to Teagan, though? o.o Why'd he not show up that day? Was he just...not there? OR do you have a secret plan? ;) |
lalapop 1/13/10 . chapter 1aw...so cute and sad..poor eva...teagan is so sweet..they are so cute together |
WishmiesterBeta 1/8/10 . chapter 1It's cute and well written. |
Spectre-Desoriente 1/8/10 . chapter 1Wow, that's so cool. I thought it was a girl, until that chick was yelling at him... |