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| Reviews for Glitter Gold |
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  A Friend 6/6/12 . chapter 6 Cool story! Update soon! |
 AnticipatedSerendipity 7/30/10 . chapter 20I really love your story so far. It's really unique, and in general, it's awesome. :D I hope you write more soon. There are a few grammatical errors in your writings, but other than that, it's great. I like your use of similies. Please keep writing! You're doing wonderfully. |
| aivia 5/2/10 . chapter 7 Yikes, I have to go to church so I'll have to come back to this later. This story reminds me a lot of "Oh My Goddess!", especially this chapter! aivia |
| aivia 5/2/10 . chapter 6 Sorry I forgot to review the other chapter, these chapters just keep breezing by! They're pretty short. Anyhow, is Pandora really a cat person? There is a ton of emphasis on that and I'm a little confused! Keep up the good work! aivia |
| aivia 5/2/10 . chapter 4 Why in the world were they given such ridiculous housing? ...I'll just keep reading and find out! |
| aivia 5/2/10 . chapter 3 What a perfect name for the cat girl! Pandora, does Naoko have any signifigance I should know about? Anyhow, please no more slashes? Chose one or the other or be more creative, because saying angry/confused ruins the flow of reading... In my opinion. aivia |
| aivia 5/2/10 . chapter 2 I like Naoko, and the analogy of cat and mouse is very cute! I cant wait to see how they actually get along. But why did you have to use astrisks to show emotion? This whole thing now looks a lot like an anime in my head now... Especially with that drop of sweat ordeal. Other than that, you're doing great! aivia |
| aivia 5/2/10 . chapter 1 Its an interesting concept, like how the girls are called dolls. My only complaint is that the chap the chapter could have been made longer with more details! aivia |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 4/9/10 . chapter 11 Interesting chapter. Confused me to death, but it was interesting. I can't wait until the next chapter. You're very good with imagery. |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 3/12/10 . chapter 8 Heh. They're jealous of her. Good work, by the way! Update soon? |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2/14/10 . chapter 6 Oh... That explains a LOT! Update soon? |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2/13/10 . chapter 5 Ha! Funny! |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2/13/10 . chapter 4 Sweet! Update soon? |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 1/31/10 . chapter 3 Very nice. Pandora strikes me as a slightly sadistic gal, but I like Naoko. |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 1/28/10 . chapter 2 Oops. Mouse-boy, cat-girl... sounds like trouble. Amusing trouble, but trouble. Update, please. |
