Interesting, I like it, especially the last set of lines.

ghostly. using any other words to summarize my feelings here would just do the poem injustice. ghostly.

I got a clear since of the narrator behind outside themselves. It was much less an internal piece, but more of the speaker noticing what has become of those around them, denying it for as long as possible, yet eventually doomed to become one of the status quo.

A great peice, although I did find it a bit short. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.