Great!

Aw! -Hugs- I love this though.

Great!

Great! So descriptive.

"These crimson stained walls

I wander here drenched.

Scarlet drizzles down like rain."

I love this! I can really relate to it.

"I owe nothing to them

it has all run out so

go to someone else for your sick

twisted desperation,

leave me alone

I'm gone."

Great!

"They always warn you

about strangers but her

monster wasn't a stranger.

She used to be afraid of monsters

now she sees who they really are- cowards."

Great!

"These little secrets

that nobody

not even you

knew what you

pushed away."

Intense and then suddenly different...

I like it.

Keep writing.

-Rippling ebullience

"A Valkyrie." Powerful.

"Who never saved themselves from their own fate." Good message. I'm tired of those fairy-tale girls. Give me empowerment and a warrior-woman who shapes her own destiny. :)

"It grew like a dandelion in the dark." EXCELLENT SIMILE! :D

Great!

"Backed up against a bolted door." There's something subtly sensual about the tone here (which is very interesting considering that this line is probably a 'bad' thing since it's referring to child abuse; still, I like it).

Great!

LOL. Just so you know, I love the fact that the A/N is longer than the poem itself. I like when the writer leaves their own interpretation.

"God, why didn't you save me?" I asked myself that same question when I was younger.

I love the repetition of the biblical line: "The Lord is my shepherd, I shall not want." It's beautiful.

"Still warm." God, that's heavy. I also like the way in which it connects to the line: "Take a knife and flay the skin off." Very chilling.

Like always, this is a lovely piece. The power in the words bring tears to my eyes. Yes, that's simply how strong it is.

You have a talent for writing.

You are precious to this world. Don't let anyone tell you elsewise, and, I don't care if you don't don't believe in god. I don't either.

Narq.