Excellent imagery. I don't know of anyone who doesn't want to lie in a hammock, under the stars, smelling the pines and being close to someone they love. Fascinating perception on success. And I really like your 13 line "When this night becomes reality" You're dreaming, but harboring a hope that this is what it will be like one day. Inspiring.

Keep Writing!

makes me think about a nature poem,anyway I like it, it's kinda peaceful...

I like this. (: I can tell your passion for what you believe in, it's unmistakable. Extremely good imagery ")